Comments on Magazine Article

After finishing creating the magazine review we distributed it to the audience range that we were aimed at (film guru's and older teenagers) and got them to comment on the magazine review. Overall, the comments were largely positive but there were some criticisms that were present which will be changed where relevant and necessary.

Ogor Osubor - 17 Years Old

"The newspaper article works really well. The picture grabs the readers attention because of his facial expression which makes it more likely for audiences to read it. There are a few grammatical errors in the text and one word not making sense. Also the text is a little hard to read because of the background image"

Jesse Cherdchuwichaikoon - 18 Years Old

Laura Hanley - 18 Years Old

Joshua Asto - 17 Years Old

"The magazine review is very informative and gives relevant information that is relevant to the audience. The image at the top left of the page is eye catching and that is one of the things that has attracted me to read the magazine. The text is very informative and contains the relevant information. The only thing I would question is the boxes on the right. Maybe the colour could be different"

From the comments that we have received form the magazine article it is clear that the most common praises are the actual text of the review which people are commenting on stating that it is fit for the audience we were looking for, and the layout of the magazine and the image used which a lot of the audience have said that is the key element that drew them in to read the article.
However, we also received some criticism from the magazine review which will be changed to rectify the issues. The most common complaint was the breakout boxes on the right of the article where most audiences suggested that it looked a little weird and would be best if it changed colour, due to this coming up in almost all of the comments this is going to be the key thing that will be changed.
Another issue from one user which was mentioned was the over use of the shadow for the heading which will also be changed due to it appearing too dark on the page.